Posted by Hiss walla walla walla hiss on February 27, 2009, 3:54 pm, in reply to "Whee"
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welllll because I'm noob at this I take special "how to judge better" classes (and also there are only two judges these days) and it got lovingly pointed out that I might say something in a post script but not actually give any sort of relevant point to that (like something's vague and not quite there yet still give high points. So there's gonna be a change or two, sorry hun.
x. Name reference (0-4) 1 - a severe change because I don't really think about fillers, and i didn't actually personally try to work this out, I just looked to make sure all the connections made sense, which they do, but wulfy-babe is right in saying the puppy bones makes you focus on the first half of the sentence.
x. Harem reference (0-4) 4
x. Rank reference* (0-4) 4
x. History/Achievements reference (0-4) 2 Filler** (-2-0)
x. Extras*** (varies/MAX 2.5)
TOTAL: 11/16
for vagueness really, as I said before, but by me it's still a pass.
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