Posted by jaeger rep on December 11, 2008, 6:28 pm, in reply to "JUDGES PLEASE --> Explaination etc."
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you know, i almost guessed ahriman, but then held myself back. XP go figure, go with your first guess, lmao.
anywaay, here's what i think.
x. Name reference (0-4) 3/4, Had i googled ahriman, I would've gotten this, though the created pet would've thrown me a bit. :3 but not much, since it fits. therefore, i'll dock only one point for that.
x. Harem reference (0-4) 3/4 pretty clear, that one. :3 though sands also could've gone for sol, which caused some confusion at first.
x. Rank reference* (0-4) 2/4 This one I'm shaky about. I actually like your reference, though I think you could've tied it in better. That said, the moment I saw 'commissioned', i did think soldier, so it did strike the chord it was supposed to.
x. History/Achievements reference (0-4) 2/4. It's a pretty good connection, now that I know what you mean, but your wording makes me think he's failed every battle, up to his most recent fourth attempt.
x. Filler** (-2-0)
x. Extras*** (varies/MAX 2.5)
TOTAL: 10/16
Passing. :) good job.
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