Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on February 21, 2009, 12:49 am, in reply to "kayne west! [judges]"
Message modified by administrator Judglet February 22, 2009, 12:36 am
LEGEND
Attack 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 Although many attack this area, most do not realize it is an incredibly specific area to attack. The leg itself is fairly thin (not like a stick, of course) but just enough that aiming two hooves at it will make it severely difficult to hit properly, and to land without problems. POWER: 5/5 Powerful O.o TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 LEGEND
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 4/5 After pulling past Voraer, it would have been a fairly close proximity- which lessens the blow somewhat. Otherwise, excellent. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VORAER
Defense 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 There could have been other ways to counter her attack; head on collision, in this footing? A no-no. DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 Considering how there wasn't much you could do, I feel you used what little leeway you had. Well done. CREATIVITY BONUS: +1 Voraer's attitude, his thoughts, everything about him makes the battle posts interesting to read. Even his Fire has a mind of its own. VORAER
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VORAER
Attack 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 Trotting is a very unwise decision; it places excessive amounts of weight onto the hoof. Poor Voraer, going through all this. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VORAER
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 Nicely done. CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 LEGEND
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 LEGEND
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 You could not have moved much more than this I think. You used the smart way out XD CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 LEGEND
Subtotal: 58/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 58/60 VORAER
Subtotal: 59/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 59/60 By my judgment, VORAER is the winner!
That means Andarin owes Ni'Srilan a prisoner! This was a very close battle you two; I could hardly find anything wrong with both your posts. Amazing descriptions, and informed enough for the reader to understand where each horse is at what time, how they got there... It was really all those dreaded nitpicks that everyone hates.
Well done, Spooks and Blu.
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