Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on February 8, 2009, 2:54 pm, in reply to "I suck harder. (Judges)" Excellent battle, ladies. The main issues I see here are a bit of continuity (easily solved, really). Kway, a note: be careful with how far you go with your defenses. The second defense almost, almost, made me dock a point. It took me awhile to figure out whether it was possible or not and I'm still not sure if it indeed possible, but I suppose it is... in my mind, I can see it, but I'm not quite sure. So, careful. Short and neat makes the Judge happy. Keep up the good work, ladies.
Message modified by administrator Judglet February 8, 2009, 3:30 pm
FEHAZATHANT
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 4/5 My one issue is that it seems slow; Vurtne could be moving throughout this all, which would hamper Fez's attack - especially since he's deep in the mud. CREATIVITY BONUS: +1 Clever usage of the weather to favor you. FEHAZATHANT
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 4/5 I'd like to see a bit more of delay here. For someone who sunk deep into the mud for balance, he seems to get out of it way too easily. CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VURTNE
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +1 Clever use of Fez's delay to gtfo and segue into your attacks. VURTNE
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VURTNE
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 4/5 The chest isn't really the best place to kick - hurts, yes, but isn't exactly impairing, especially in close quarters as they are. TIMING: 4/5 Also, Fehazathant is besides Vurtne as of his second attack; how did Vurtne get his hindquarters pointing at the chest? Shoulder, mayhaps, but the chest? CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VURTNE
Attack 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 Mrr, striking straight behind at such a narrow target as the knee is quite the risk... he can't see through his own ass, after all; he could easily miss, or Fez could move even just slightly. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 FEHAZATHANT
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 FEHAZATHANT
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 FEHAZATHANT
Subtotal: 59/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 59/60 VURTNE
Subtotal: 58/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 58/60 By my judgment, FEHAZATHANT is the winner! Solira owes Andarin a prisoner (or will be captured themselves)!
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