Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on February 4, 2009, 6:55 am, in reply to "you should care -cries- [judges]"
Message modified by administrator Judglet February 4, 2009, 3:41 pm
VORAER
Attack 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 A bit of a stretch, considering Alerion is bigger, and how far apart the foreleg and nose is, but. Very interesting. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VORAER
Attack 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 You say you turned to the right, -which, if I go by your earlier directions that Voraer remained on Alerion's left side- then Voraer's head would be facing Alerion's side, not Voraer's hooves. A simple mistake, I'm sure. Just try to read through it to save confusion ^^ POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALERION
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALERION
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALERION
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 Certainly a dangerous area to hit. TIMING: 4/5 I feel that Alerion moves a little too fast for my liking- considering Voraer isn't going to sit pretty the whole time Alerion does his pirouette and all ^^ CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALERION
Attack 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 You could have delivered a good amount of damage to Voraer by attacking the lower foreleg, and saved poor Alerion the exertion of adding insult to injury- his gimp leg. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VORAER
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 VORAER
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +1 Absolutely love Voraer's Fire's attitude. It has very much a mind of its own, and the chestnut has a temper to match. VORAER
Subtotal: 59/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 59/60 ALERION
Subtotal: 58/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 58/60 By my judgment, VORAER is the winner!
This was very difficult; I read through it several times to get a feeling- both of you had perfect 60, but I'm afraid it was those tiny little bits of information that had to be used to decide this. I have little advice for you; both are excellent, with detail, description and you always keep the weather and position in mind. Well done!
I believe both are in Ni'Srilan- no prisoners then! Congratulations, Voraer.
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