Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on February 1, 2009, 8:14 am, in reply to "THEIR ONLY ATTIRE IS A TYPICAL VICE [JUDGES]"
Message modified by administrator Judglet February 1, 2009, 1:22 pm
ARTAXXAS
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 No issues here. CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ARTAXXAS
Attack 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 Excellent idea of making Aquila use her injured left leg- though perhaps more damage could have been done by aiming for her leg? Still, powerful. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 AQUILA
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 Excellent maneuver. CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 AQUILA
Defense 2REALISM: 3/5 -1 The first part of Artaxxas' combo goes undefended against. You say you 'continue moving' while she initiates her second part of the combo, but you do nothing for the beginning. -1 Again, I do not see an actual defense; you may be moving, but it is not an attempt to lessen the blow, in my eyes. DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 AQUILA
Attack 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 I believe you added more insult to your own injury by rearing up for that region of attack. Easily, you could ahve kicked her leg out from under her, etc. Still, powerful indeed. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 AQUILA
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ARTAXXAS
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 I can't see anything wrong with this O.o CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ARTAXXAS
Defense 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 You didn't quite make sense here. "She continued her previous duck, aided by the staggering push of the other. Overwhelming equine instinct told her to flee, but her muscles screamed as she coiled and flexed them in her defense. She could not move as swiftly as hoped and once more Aquila’s hooves struck right behind her elbow, where the girth is usually placed."
Were you running, rearing, etc? Please be more clear.DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ARTAXXAS
Subtotal: 58/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 58/60 AQUILA
Subtotal: 57/60Elemental Score: 2 For Emotional, and Water's power over Fire. Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 59/60 By my judgment, AQUILA is the winner!
It always ends up so close! Both of you have excellent skill, and I loved the behaviour you kept with your horses. Many people forget to include their horses' personalities- it ends up as just hack and slash. Nicely done. In the end, it was those little nitpicks that I hate to do. Congratulations, Aquila!
Since Aquila is of a different herd than Artaxxas, I'll let you to discuss the prisoners.
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