Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on January 27, 2009, 12:35 pm, in reply to "WELL I DID NOT THINK THE GIRL COULD BE SO CRUEL [JUDGES]"
Message modified by administrator Judglet January 31, 2009, 3:13 pm
ALTAIR
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 Undoubtedly strong, especially if it was around those weaker joints. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +1 I honestly can't see anything wrong with this assault O.o Assuming it was a Combo, it was well played out. People sometimes underestimate the speed in which horses can initiate their attacks. ALTAIR
Attack 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 Aiming for the knee, specifically, is a bit precise. It is a slim area, though the joint is indeed rounder, but otherwise, good. POWER: 5/5 Definitely powerful. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 BRISINGR
Defense 1REALISM: 3/5 -1 Typically, a horse wouldn't jsut charge forwards into the danger zone. I believe you could have initiated a pivot with safer repercussions. -1 Apart from speeding up, there really wasn't a defense. Especially with the second half of Altair's Combo. DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 BRISINGR
Defense 2REALISM: 3/5 -1 A bit confusing to understand what you are doing. Are you beside him, is he in front of you? Please elaborate. -1 Again, no defense. You simply elongate your strides- it may get you to move faster, but it isn't reducing the blows realistically. DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 BRISINGR
Attack 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 You seem to forget all your injuries during this attack. Do not shrug them off. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 4/5 You seem to move a bit too fast for my liking, considering you've just taken a blow to the elbow. CREATIVITY BONUS: +2 I like how you kept in mind the weather.
I also like the behaviour of her Fire elemental, almost as though it has a mind of its own.BRISINGR
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 4/5 With the pain she is in, rearing up to attack his hock would be more taxing on Brisingr than her opponent, which decreases the power. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 Nothing wrong with this attack. You timed it well, and took decent damage. Sometime,s equine logic is wise to use. CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Defense 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 You say you had to succumb to the equine logic, but where is it? I did not see a defense. DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Subtotal: 59/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 1 The weather was always on your mind, good job. Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 60/60 BRISINGR
Subtotal: 55/60Elemental Score: 1 For Brisingr's Fire over Altair's Air. Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 56/60 By my judgment, ALTAIR is the winner!
This was a difficult battle to judge, but both of you did fairly well. Remember to utilize the resource of a horse's agility. They can pivot, raise legs, rear, balk. Remember to do your best to avoid the hit, not simply run around.
I'll allow you to discuss prisoners, if needed. Otherwise, congratulations.
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