Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on November 17, 2008, 10:45 pm, in reply to "and it's your fire that feeds and fuels my power"
Message modified by board administrator November 19, 2008, 7:42 am
ETHEREAL
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 4/5 Not the most powerful of attacks, but very realistic in the current weather conditions TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ETHEREAL
Attack 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 Probably a little over the top for the conditions, even with the stumble afterwards POWER: 4/5 The weather should have being taken into consideration a bit more here. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Defense 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 You can't rely on your Air ability when it is weaker to Fire, even when "moving fast" DAMAGE: 4/5 -1 Air being weaker to Fire you could have taken a little bit more damage than you did, you didn't mention the weakness there - keep that in mind when battling the stronger element TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Defense 2REALISM: 4/5 -1 You say again that you have the stronger element - "naturally faster and stronger (both by Air and gender)" and in the comment "sending gusts of wind towards her fire in attempts to extinguish it" - Fire FEEDS on Air, therefore it's weaker - you are not stronger by element, you are weaker and didn't take that into consideration during your movements here DAMAGE: 4/5 -1 Being the weaker element you should have acknolwedged this and acknowledged that you took more damage because of it TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Attack 1REALISM: 4/5 -1 "his Air-cold hooves seeking to freeze-burn anything" - again, you are the weaker element, you can't "freeze-burn" her. POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 4/5 After your opponent kicked out, you'd both have to come face to face and then re-approach her again, this would take some considerable amount of time CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALTAIR
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ETHEREAL
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ETHEREAL
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ETHEREAL
Subtotal: 57/60Elemental Score: 1 For Fire III being stronger to Air III Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 58/60 ALTAIR
Subtotal: 54/60Elemental Score: 0 Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -1 You really do need to take into consideration you are the weaker element, your air cannot extinguish her fire, it fuels it. Think of, blowing on embers, it's how you get a fire started. Keep that in mind if you battle another Fire element horse against your Air element. FINAL SCORE: 53/60 By my judgment, ETHEREAL is the winner!
*I just wanted to make note, I would have taken off two points from Ethereal for not taking enough damage normally, but since she was the stronger element, naturally the attacks would be weaker against her - just mention that in your posts. Hence why you didn't have any points taken off your last attack, just letting you know so you don't think I missed a section*
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