Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on November 16, 2008, 9:47 am, in reply to "OOHH LA LA, FIESTY"
Message modified by administrator Judglet1 November 18, 2008, 1:33 am
ALCATRAZ
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALCATRAZ
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ZAKR
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ZAKR
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 4/5 -1 I don't think you took as much damage here as you should have. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ZAKR
Attack 1REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 4/5 Earth or no earth, cantering up and then rearing effortlessly in this weather is pushing it a tad. CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ZAKR
Attack 2REALISM: 5/5 POWER: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALCATRAZ
Defense 1REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 5/5 TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALCATRAZ
Defense 2REALISM: 5/5 DAMAGE: 4/5 -1 I think you actually took a little too much damage here. *winces* That sounded...awful. TIMING: 5/5 CREATIVITY BONUS: +0 ALCATRAZ
Subtotal: 59/60Elemental Score: 0 -1: In your attacks, you neglect to remember that your element is the weaker. You did take that into consideration better for your defenses, though.
+1: use of super.Bonus Points: 1 You are so goddamned scary it's not even funny. Penalties: -1 I feel like you don't give Zakr any room for options, especially in your first attack. I know powerplaying is a dirty word -- and I'm not suggesting that you're doing it -- but it's coming a little close for comfort, you know? FINAL SCORE: 59/60 ZAKR
Subtotal: 58/60Elemental Score: +2 +1 for super, +1 for stronger element. Bonus Points: 0 Penalties: -0 FINAL SCORE: 60/60 By my judgment, ZAKR is the winner! Solira owes Ni'Srilan a prisoner, else Alcatraz goes to the Vipers
Just a note - this was supremely well-fought by both of you. This is why there are not very many comments on this judgment; there wouldn't be anything for me to say other than "nice" and "excellent defense" and "very good." It sort of rankles me to have battles won/lost by just a point or two, so I apologize. In the end it mostly came down to the elemental difference and a slightly-too-forceful Traz.
I just want to commend you for such an extremely well-fought battle. It was a pleasure to read.
As for the shocking issue, I think it's fine. It says in the rules you can create small shocks. Probably shouldn't expect it to make him really jump and squeal, but it is a valid inclusion in an attack.
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