Posted by THE ELEMENTALS
on August 19, 2008, 9:26 am, in reply to "I THOUGHT I COULD COUNT ON YOU FOR DISTURBED LYRICS! (JUDGE)"
Message modified by administrator JudgeJudy August 19, 2008, 3:33 pm
Challenger #1: OZYMANDIAS
Challenger #2: KURAI
CHALLENGER #1
Attack One
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 because it is unrealistic to assume a horse will let you come up from behind it.
Power: 5/5 : I see no issues
Timing: 4/5 : -1 because your attack relies too much on Kurai not moving at all, because to rear and expect him to still be there is not so.
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
CHALLENGER #1
Attack Two
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 because in order to become parallel with Kurai he would have had to get past him and then swing around. Seeing as you attacked from behind.
Power: 5/5 : Again powerful. But if you weren’t an earth horse this would be a horrible idea.
Timing: 4/5 : -1 because in order to land from your first attack, and then pass Kurai and start your next attack would take longer than you think.
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
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CHALLENGER #2
Defense One
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Realism: 5/5 : very easily seen.
Damage: 4/5 : very nice, but I think it would be more painful than that.
Timing: 5/5 : no qualms
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 14/15
CHALLENGER #2
Defense Two
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 I wouldn’t retake damage to the same leg.
Damage: 4/5 : -1 for hurting yourself more than you needed to.
Timing: 5/5 : Nothing amiss.
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
CHALLENGER #2
Attack One
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 because although very realistic, the majority of weight being on a single foreleg is a little far-fetched.
Power: 4/5 : -1 because he wouldn’t be able to extend the buck with as much power where his front leg is so badly hurt.
Timing: 5/5 : nothing amiss here
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
CHALLENGER #2
Attack Two
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 for rearing in such horrible footing.
Power: 5/5 : nothing wrong here
Timing: 4/5 : -1 because where he walks into this…it might take too long.
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
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CHALLENGER #1
Defense One
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 taking a blow to the gut where no ribs are is where most of the vital organs are. Such bruising internally would be excruciatingly painful.
Damage: 4/5 : -1 Simply losing your breath is no where near enough.
Timing: 5/5 : seems ok.
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
CHALLENGER #1
Defense Two
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Realism: 4/5 : -1 because you don’t take into account your first injury. It would make coiling your haunch painful in your stomach regardless
Damage: 5/5 : nicely taken
Timing: 4/5 : -1 because it seems a little slow and that you underestimate Kurai’s gravity coming down.
Creativity Bonus: 0
TOTAL: 13/15
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OVERALL
Challenger #1
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Total from Above: 52/60
Elemental Score*: +1 for elemental advantage
Bonus Points**: +1 for use of Corpsetouch
Penalties***: -1 for firming the footing completely. I think this is very implausible. Perhaps to firm it slightly, less liquid quality. But not completely solid. -1 Because you are only allowed to strike once, not to continually attack the target unless you called into ability you use of combo, which I did not see.
GRAND TOTAL – 52/60
Challenger #2
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Total from Above: 53/60
Elemental Score*:
Bonus Points**: +1 for use of Stupefy. +1 for your awesome take on Corpsetouch.
Penalties***:
GRAND TOTAL – 55/60
I DECLARE KURAI TO BE THE WINNER. Well done both of you.
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