Posted by THE ELEMENTALS on August 16, 2008, 8:30 am, in reply to "I WANT TO SEE YOU TOUCH YOUR BODY - MAB, II"
Message modified by administrator JudgeJudy August 19, 2008, 10:29 am
CHALLENGER #1 - MAB
Attack One
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Realism: 4/5 It would be fine except that Mab just assumes Zakr will stand there, letting her do as she please.
Power: 5/5 No doubt.
Timing: 4/5 Zakr is a thoroughbred, and faster and more agile than you, but you assume that you are able to maneuver him however you please.
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CHALLENGER #1 – MAB
Attack Two
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Realism: 5/5
Power: 5/5 Definitely powerful.
Timing: 4/5 Again, you refuse to acknowledge the fact that Mab is bulkier and less maneuverable than Zakr.
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CHALLENGER #2 - ZAKR
Defense One
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Realism: 5/5 It was very effective, I think.
Damage: 4/5 You should have taken more damage.
Timing: 4/5 You do have an advantage in speed, but Zakr wouldn’t be able to turn them around that far.
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CHALLENGER #2 - ZAKR
Defense Two
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Realism: 5/5 Good.
Damage: 4/5 More damage could have been taken from Mab’s super ability.
Timing: 5/5
Creativity Bonus: +1 I haven’t seen this before, and I thought it was very nice and effective.
CHALLENGER #2 - ZAKR
Attack One
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Realism: 4/5 My only problem is you don’t elaborate on how inescapable your attack is. (Even if it isn’t truly inescapable, it’s still nice to hear you give your opponent options and then dash them by explaining how they wouldn’t work. Lol.)
Power: 5/5
Timing: 5/5
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CHALLENGER #2 - ZAKR
Attack Two
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Realism: 5/5
Power: 4/5 Not the most powerful of attacks.
Timing: 5/5
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OVERALL
Challenger #1
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Total from Above: 27/30
Elemental Score*: +1 I’m forced to because of your super ability, however, -1 for ignoring how the rain would affect her fire.
Bonus Points**:
Penalties***: -1 Mab refused to acknowledge any weakness, making her a super horse. Some mention of how her opponent was faster than her would have helped.
GRAND TOTAL – 26/30, 86%
Challenger #2
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Total from Above: 55/60
Elemental Score*: +1 You used your Earth well.
Bonus Points**: +1 I also like how you used Mab’s super ability to your advantage.
Penalties***: -1 However, you do need to elaborate more on your attacks and defenses.
GRAND TOTAL – 56/60, 93%
ZAKR is the winner. Congratulations.
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